Monday, May 24, 2010
chapter 1
My name is Lily Martinez and i just moved to maine. I just love maine. The beach is wonderful and i have a cat named midnight and my dog linda. I love my parents and i am really sad that my parents got divorced. I love both of them but i decided to be with my mother because she loves me and she gave birth to me. Me and my mom are happy together and we do things fun. she cooks good until i got kidnapped.
pitch
my novel is going to be about a named lily and on age 6 she gets kidnapped and her parents are worried because she did not come home. Her parents call the police but she was never found. but poor lily was tied up and could not escape. then when the bad guy goes out side to smoke and she escapes.now she must find her way back home. she has to go to maine to be with her parents
Wednesday, January 20, 2010
My Feature Article
As you know I was against dog fighting. I interviewed only one person and that was my cousin molly. She is my older cousin who is 20 years old. I interviewed her because she has seen other people making dogs fighting. I am against dog fighting because the poor dogs don't deserve to be threaten badly. Like for example if dogs get in to a fight they might get injured or get killed. Instead of making dogs fight they can also send them to the pound.
The first question is what would you do if you saw someone making 2 dogs fight? My cousin molly said, ''I would call the police before the 2 dogs kill each other. My dad said he will stare at the dogs then he will keep doing what he was doing.
The next question is how would you feel if your dog was in thebecause dog fights. My cousin molly said ''I would hate it to see my dog in the dog fights because they might treat her bad and leave her without food''.
The first question is what would you do if you saw someone making 2 dogs fight? My cousin molly said, ''I would call the police before the 2 dogs kill each other. My dad said he will stare at the dogs then he will keep doing what he was doing.
The next question is how would you feel if your dog was in thebecause dog fights. My cousin molly said ''I would hate it to see my dog in the dog fights because they might treat her bad and leave her without food''.
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