my moms wedding
My moms wedding was fun and it had a lot of people. People usually behaved rude because of there pushing dance. So then they behaved nasty because they just spilled sham pain of each other and they threw the bottles on the floor. But what i liked was when my mom and my step dad were finally happy together. I really like my stepfather he is nice,fun,and gives me what ever i want.
Monday, November 9, 2009
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Mary-
ReplyDeleteGood job with subject-verb agreement, but watch out for homophones (there, their, they're) and apostrophes! ("My moms wedding") Also make sure you capitalize "I" when you type.
Also, "sham pain" should be "champagne". :) Otherwise your spelling is good. Also, when you describe how someone did something, add -ly to the word: "behaved rudely" instead of "behaved rude." We'll discuss this more when we learn about adverbs.
Put spaces after commas when you type.
Mr. Enders